7 thoughts on “Haiku #02

  1. S Francis says:

    For the longest time this was part of s much longer poem that I just couldn’t get to work, but thanks to PH and the haiku he challenged out of me, I saw that what I had originally written was basically haiku with a chopped syllable or two. Bam… what I think stands on its own.

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