Into My Own: My Story as a Writer, Part II – Why I Wrote (1986)

I began my autobiography as a writer with https://sailorpoet.com/2018/05/08/into-my-own-my-story-as-a-writer-part-i-how-it-began/ an essay that explained how I began writing. It told the story of how I wrote my first poem in a note to a friend and how intoxicating those early days felt after finding this vehicle for getting things out of my head into the world. In reality, I had no idea what that world was all about let alone how to communicate with it. I had merely discovered a tool for getting my thoughts out of my own head, perhaps simply to communicate with myself. So, why did I write? This communication proved invaluable for me to understand who I was. It took another half dozen years for me to learn the phrase introvert and what it meant and probably another dozen or more for me to really understand what the definition truly meant in real terms. I did know that my head got stuck on things that other people didn’t seem too interested in and I was labeled as Serious.

Like any teenage boy, I felt uncomfortable in my own skin and needed to figure out how to fix this discomfort. Funny that none of my poetry about teenage emotional angst survived that fateful move that lost my enumerated, sacred early works. While this may have its merits in quality control, its merits in understanding what things plagued me are distinctly absent. Now, I only have a few remaining poems that I took the time to transcribe into the computer when I got to college, so they must have mattered more than the others, either because I thought they were of better quality or they meant something significant to me. They each offer different clues to answer the riddle of why I wrote (note, that I still kept the exact dates they were written, a helpful convenience today).

The Dreams of Coronus
May 25, 1986

Looking up from below
He stands high above me
I search in the heavens
As the world will see
Wherever I search,
He stands beside me
His hands support my soul
The dreams of Coronus
The dream of Peace
He watches
He understands
I feel the presence of Heaven

Aside from revealing my poor conjugating ability, what this really reveals is a significant clue into why I wrote. First, for clarity, Coronus is me; my name being Stephen, Stephen meaning crown in the original Greek, and Corona being the word for crown in Latin, the language I took in high school. I will let the pretentiousness speak for itself, but at the very least this serves as an early indication of being unable to reconcile this inner being who wrote with the outer being everyone knew as Steve. Not yet 16, I was writing about God, grappling with faith and finding confidence in my beliefs. This didn’t feel normal to me back then. Maybe it was normal, maybe it wasn’t.

I do know this confidence in my beliefs reflected in “Dreams of Coronus,” gave me confidence to reject a lot of the things that other kids were exploring at that age, like drugs and alcohol. The neighborhood I grew up in was a little more remote and off a too-busy and unsafe highway to walk down into town to hang out with the bulk of the kids. As a result, I grew up a little more isolated; not alone, by any stretch, it was still a neighborhood with neighborhood kids and regular activities like sledding and capture the flag, but it was far removed from the party culture that grew up elsewhere. In the end, this never bothered me, and the distance proved crucial in my development as a writer as well as a young adult. Plus, I became interested in Serious things, like God and peace.

The Child
June 19, 1986

Bullets pierce and echo the air
Villagers abandon their flaming homes
The king cannot see, only the Lord sees
Reasons do not matter as bloodshed begins

On a hilltop the one flag quivers in the wind
Tears pour into the Child’s innocent eyes
His brother has died in the flames of war-
Horror from what was once so grand

Unnoticed, underfoot our freedom drifts
We, sightless, block our ears from the Child’s wail
His father has died in the ocean of war
Only to be as us- free

The fire rages across the countryside
The Child is shot in his tears
The memory of his brother burns
The memory of his father drowns

One man fills his jars with tears
His son fills dreams with fears
Both are dead, burned by lead
Nothing left, there is no son

Nothing left, there is no village
At dawn the flames consumed the last morsel
On a hillside the one flag quivers
The stars shine, the bullets pierce the air

We bury the Child under the flag
His father would have won the flag
They bled too long for
A reason too wrong

Bullets pierce and echo the air
The village burnt to the ground
Does any flesh mourn the Child?
Oh Lord…

Reasons do not matter when innocence sheds blood.

These poems explain a lot about what this Serious late-15 year old boy was concerned about and goes a long way to confirming how Serious I was. My mother always called me Too Serious, a comment that felt more disparaging than she meant it to be as she longed for me to be healthy and happy. However, she was right. I was too serious to really fit in with my peers and really struggled with the right and wrong of feeling out of place in my own skin. With “The Child,” I began to tap into the compassion that I felt as an essential element of my Catholic lessons, and still do.

When I read these words today, I hear the voice of a young man compelled to write as a vehicle for expressing things he couldn’t just talk about in casual conversation. After all, who really wants to talk about war and God in between 200s at swim practices or while trading baseball cards or while sneaking looks at the latest Swimsuit edition? Thus writing became an essential vehicle to figure out how my beliefs defined my reactions to a growing awareness of the world and the great tragedies that were the by-products of historic events, here the death of children in war.

Vision of Tomorrow
July 31, 1986

The world is restless under my feet
I haven’t seen the sun in days
Black clouds hover the ground I walk
Yet there is no one to see what I see

The world rots in universal entropy
No light finds the grass I walk
Heaven’s tears flood the pours of my dry skin
Heaven’s roars frighten the tiny children

Here in this isolated town sleeps a naive soul
Blind by youth to the world in his eyes
He knows none see his visions
He knows he speaks false words

Here in this isolated town I sleep
Blind by youth to the mad world in my eyes
I worry of love and other bittersweet passions
I will rise above to see the world

Over the Appalachians and through the pines
I long to have the vision of years
Yet only through time will God grant my wish
I will still dream of mares in the night, and white stallions.

Lightning flashes in my eyes
The princes and slaves, two-faced societies
The land ahead is covered by clouds
I run onward in spite of my blindness

Does she on the blue-green hilltop have sight
Are the stars above hers to gaze in a dreamy awe
Does she lie blind like the naive soul I am
She is one of the merry youth

A naive child searching through the attic
I look for the key to open my sight
Soon I will find it and unlock the door
Open my eyes to the winds eluding me

The key has been stolen
The door opens before my naive eyes
The wind’s howl threatens the lies in my life
Of sweet music and star filled skies

Shut the door- my eyes burn
My ears long for the sweet music
Reality is upon the blue-green hilltop
The stars are ours in a dreamy awe

Is this my sight?
Are these mountains only my visions?
Will you look with me or sit alone?
I, naive child dare to be an adult

There she rests alone on the blue-green hilltop
She has the stars in her gaze of dreamy awe
If only the stars were not behind the clouds
I would trap the stars in her gaze

The world rushes behind the drag of my feet
The light of the sky is hidden for me to find
I write these words never to be understood
Like the scream of a child in a moonless night

Please let me gaze at a starlit sky
One last chance to wish upon my naive falling star
Soon the truth will burn this naiveté
My child will crumble in the heap of an adult

She sits with me on the blue-green hilltop
The stars are ours to gaze in a dreamy awe
The sun will shine upon our new days
The blackness of night will pass

Will the world wait for me?
I gaze my dreamy awe one last time
Run from the hilltop with me, dream and weep
Soon the world will turn in the palm of your warm hand.

The final poem rescued from those floppy discs perhaps tells the most about who this 15-year-old boy version of me was – and clearly, there is a lot of confusion in this mess of a poem. The loneliness of being Serious screams out as well as the isolation and the longing to understand why. There is arrogance directed at my peers and frustration about being young and naïve. There is longing for adventure and there is romance and there is longing for a mysterious “she” on a hill that will understand me and gaze up at the same stars I saw.  Maybe this she was the blonde runner I idealized and had a crush on or maybe this “she” is poetry or The Muse.

In these words, I find a boy who wanted almost too badly to be an adult without any real understanding of what that meant, but was fairly prescient about it “My child will crumple in the heap of an adult.” Clearly, not being Serious wasn’t a real option to me, and I was bound and determined to figure out why and what I was serous about.

And so I wrote.

40 thoughts on “Into My Own: My Story as a Writer, Part II – Why I Wrote (1986)

  1. geni2017 says:

    So good that you have kept these. So many poems are written and lost. This shows that you were a very serious, thoughtful, and intelligent boy. Thank you so much for sharing.

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  2. S Francis says:

    Thank you and I am glad it inspired your reflections as well. Over the next month, I am hoping to tackle the third installment … 1987!

    Writing became something that was more important than I could explain to myself, let alone others. I WAS serious, but I also was silly, and I needed a place to go where I could be safe and serious. That place became my writing. And man did I write… it was a compulsion. However, I am glad I did follow that compulsion.

    Happy for you to have read!

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  3. Breanna N Ransome says:

    I truly enjoyed the examination of your younger self as if he exists outside of the person you are now, analyzing what that younger self wrote just as you would analyze a poem or a passage written by an author you’ve never known; and maybe you’ve never known your younger self. Either way, it is quite fitting. I heavily relate to your conclusion that you wrote because you wanted to find out why not being serious wasn’t an option and what you were serious about. I look at my writing from when I was 14-17 years old and can see similarities of “seriousness.” Great read; it inspired personal reflection.

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  4. Singledust says:

    I see my kids take selfies for snapchat their place to connect with friends and family and recently i have been receiving some lovely selfies from others too. Davy’s words made sense because it was actually capturing a moment of the heart. Reflected in their happy smiles they wanted to capture that moment before it passed. Not a self indulgent moment on the contrary a generous sharing of a precious moment with someone special who wasn’t there at the exact time. Made sense suddenly somehow. Photos are posed for and sometimes not shared but happy moment selfies always are.

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  5. Davy D says:

    I used to put a lot of time into Twitter but it has become more of a slog of late. It seems less personal than wordpress. Do you have any experience of other platforms?

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  6. Davy D says:

    It will work itself out. I think it is just trying things out and feeling the emotion of it. I spend most of my time on WordPress as I like the honesty and supportiveness of the connections you make. It has more of a community feel than some other social media platforms.

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  7. Davy D says:

    Understanding what goes behind the poet, in my view, is as important as the poetry. It helps the reader get into the poets mindset and enhances the experience of the poem. Always a pleasure Mr. S 🙂

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  8. S Francis says:

    Thank you, serious felt okay back then, but it took sometime to understand that serious didn’t mean unhappy or not fun. It just meant that maybe I felt things a little differently than others. Time enables me to see this better now, for sure. Thank you for these kind and supportive words.

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  9. S Francis says:

    Thank you Mr D. It takes a little time to both understand my perspective on my own writing without being unkind to myself, but also to properly remember and respect the time period. I want to both observe myself in that time period as a unique human but also a part of the human I am today; and to make it a reflection that isn’t so self absorbed that others cannot appreciate how our common humanity connects. I appreciate these words more than you know.

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  10. Davy D says:

    Stephen, I echo Vanessa’s and Singledust’s sentiments. There is a wonderful humanity and bravery in your poetry reflections. Poetry is like a selfie of our soul, taken in that particular moment in time. Thank you for sharing and looking forward to reading the next installment.

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  11. S Francis says:

    Thank you Maria. Revisiting these poems with perspective it encourages me that I was on to something when I felt what I did about the importance of writing in my life. Thank you for the “posthumous” encouragement!

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  12. saynotoclowns says:

    Wow Stephen, this is extraordinary! How wonderful for you to have these! I love the poems, that 15 year old has more talent than a lot of adults!
    And I can relate to so much of it really. One of my childhood friends told me it was like I had the weight of the world on my shoulders. I often used humour to cope of course. But then I would unintentionally blind side my closest friends with serious musings out of the blue haha
    These poems are really beautiful. Thank you for sharing all of this.

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  13. Singledust says:

    beautiful words from a beautiful soul, struggling, yet persisting to find meaning of life thrust upon such a young person yet a special being born wiser and ahead of its time. Even at that young age you wrote from the recesses of your keen understanding of the language of the world, though childlike words you say, its simplicity carrying more truth than more eloquent verse. You need to read the Alchemist and then read what you just wrote here.

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